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Kaafilaa Part 10

 

Hi buddies!!! How are you all????

Hope you still remember me(the vanishing writer) and my humble story!!! Hoping to now update this SS regularly… Aaiynaa and Twisty, would start typing in a while,…. Am writing after a long time so please do tell me if I lag behind somewhere…

Hope you enjoy the update!!!!

 

PART- 10

 

To say Geet was horrified would be an understatement. Her own FATHER was doing this to her? Its true that she was not his own blood but still people even get attatched to animals at their home, here she was a walking-talking human being who had spent more than 20 years of her life with him under the same roof!!. Did he despise her so much? She had respected him and followed all his orders throughout her life, except one… For that was this her punishment? But the biggest question above all these things that was now roaming in her mind was, that had Maan really did all that her or was this all a sheer misunderstanding created deliberately???

With all these thoughts in her mind, she felt herself giving away to the darkness that consumed her… Lest did she know that the lie that was told to Maan had indeed come true though partially!!!

PRESENT

A small droplet finally managed to escape from the closed hazels as those memories had left a deep scar on Geet’s fragile mind. Yes, she appeared to be strong for the ouside world but she had the heart of a baby.

While massaging Geet’s hair, Maan felt something strange; he immediately got up and was shocked to see the tears now flowing freely from his Jaan’s eyes!!!

“Geet??? Kya hua??? Did I hurt you??? Did the oil go in your eyes???” Maan asked getting extremely worried while at the same time checking her face for any signs of distress… He sounded so agitated that it made Geet open her eyes at once…

“Nahi nahi Maan… Main bilkul theek hu… In fact mujhe bahut bachchha lag raha hai…” Geet assured him while keeping her hand on his cheek leaning a soapy mark on it!!

“Phir why are you wasting my precious pearls??? Hmmm???” Maan asked while softly wiping out all the traces of tears from her pretty face…

“Uhh… Wo to bas aise hi…” Geet didn’t give any proper reply and even Maan didn’t question her further as he somewhere had an idea that she was reminiscing the happenings of the past few days, and from what he had learnt, it was not at all good!!!

“Okay!! Chalo you can have a wash and then come out, I am waiting for you outside… I have left the bathrobe on the stack.” Maan announced and left her to let her have a bath after dropping a kiss on her cheek, as he realized that she wanted a little time for composing herself…

Geet appreciated his act and silently thanked Babaji for giving her a life partner who understood all her said and unsaid words…

MAANEET’s BEDROOM

 

Maan was a little worried, as Geet seemed very disturbed about all the happenings. Though he knew that it was quite natural for anyone to get stressed if so much happened with them, but still he felt that he was missing some part of this puzzle… This whole conspiracy set against them had a much deeper link… But he couldn’t ponder on his thoughts more as he heard the bathroom door click open. He turned around to witness his enchanting maiden appear in her true glory.

“Kehtey hain Maa ban ne ka nikhaar alag hi hota hai… Aaj Geet ko dekh kar vishwaas ho gaya….” Maan thought to himself, getting lost in the divine beauty in front of him.

Though Geet was very pale but still there was a certain glow on her face and the wet hair just added to her sensuous look, making Maan shamelessly drool over his own wife!!! Geet felt a strong gaze literally boring holes into her, and once she saw those culprit eyes, her pale look transformed into dark pink!!!

“Haaye!! How much I love that blush!!” Maan thought grinning to himself while averting his eyes reluctantly giving Geet the much-required respite!!!

He saw Geet searching for something in the wardrobe while making cute faces and finally closing the wardrobe with a sigh!!

“Kya hua??” Maan asked her sweetly while going and standing in front of her…

“Umm wo main… kapde???” Geet slowly questioned him while giving a confused look!!

Maan immediately looked down guiltily while cursing himself. How could he forget something so important? In a fit of anger, he had got all Geet’s belongings removed from his room, and they were packed off in a storeroom in outhouse. Though he wanted to throw them away but his heart never agreed! But now, what would he tell her? He was thinking of formulating an answer when Geet understood his unsaid words…

“Rehney dijiye… Main abhi ke liye aapka Kurta pehen leti hoon…” Geet said sweetly and picked up his White kurta lying on top of the stack of ironed clothes…

Maan still looked down guiltily…

“Umm waise bhi abb kuchh din baad toh main unn kapdon mein fit bhi nahi hoti…” Geet said while her lower lip tucked out in a sad manner making Maan chuckle. He hugged her and kissed on her hair parting. He knew she was saying all this only to make him feel better.

“Ohh Jaan… I missed you so much…” Maan confessed.

Geet just tightened the hug as her answer. Maan slowly left her and took her in front of the mirror making her sit on the stool.

“Maan yeh aap kya…” Geet questioned but was silenced by his finger on her lips.

Maan took the sindoor dibiya in his left hand and took a pinch from it filling Geet’s parting. A little fell on her nose too while Geet just looked at him from the mirror, her eyes reflecting pure unadulterated love for him.

“Chalo abb next surprise…” Maan spoke while Geet looked at him confused.

But then he took out something from his pocket that made Geet gasp in shock!!

“Maaan.. Yeh.. yeh… yeh aapke paas… yeh to…” She couldn’t even speak as she was too overwhelmed and her throat was choked with tears…

“Haan Jaan… Uss din gusse mein maine yeh… yeh MANGALSUTRA tumse chheen toh liya thha par na jaane kyun phir maine issey apney paas hi rakh liya… Uss din se aaj tak yeh mere saath hi hai… Shayad issi mein main tumhare ehsaas ko kahi dundh leta tha…” Maan spoke, his own voice getting a little heavy…

They still remembered that fateful day…

PAST

“Nikal jaao tum aaj abhi issi waqt MERE ghar MERI zindagi sey… Main sapney mein bhi nahi soch sakta tha ki TUM, tum aisa kar sakti ho…Nafrat hai mujhey tumhaare saaye se bhi…” Maan shouted on Geet while dragging her out of the main gate…

“Itna sab hone ke baad bhi aapki itni himmat hai ki aap mere saath aise pesh aa rahey hai??? Aap kya mujhe iss ghar sey nikaalenge? Main khud yeh ghar chhod kar jaa rahi hu… Nahi rakhna mukhe aap jaise insaan ke saath koi bhi rishtaa…” Geet shouted back with equal vigour, her head held high!

“That’s great. Par uss se pehley meri ek cheez tumhare paas hai…” Maan shot back and before Geet could even react, he snatched the Mangalsutra off her neck making the chain break… Small black bead scattered around the driveway, as the Mangalsuta broke apart, just like their relationship!

PRESENT

That day both of them didn’t realize in the fit of anger, that they were both putting baseless allegations on each other but today they could not help but thank Babaji that their relationship survived the test of destiny finally!

“Par yeh toh toot gaya than na???” Geet questioned…

“Haan Jaan par jaise hamara rishta ko koi nahi tod sakta waise yeh kaise tuta reh sakta tha???” Maan spoke with a smile while tying it around her neck securely making Geet close her eyes and live this moment!

Suddenly realizing something Geet opened her eyes…

“Aapne kaha ki yeh aapkey paas uss din sey hai…toh aapney issey theek kaise karwaaya???”Geet asked getting confused while Maan just gave a lopsided smile making Geet’s eyes widen in shock!

“Aapne issey khhud theek kiya…” Geet stated rather than questioning him…

She just fell in love all over once again for this man in front of her, how could she even believe all that crap against him? She just leapt in his awaiting arms and placed her lips on his… Thanking him for everything!

A knock on the door brought them out from their lala land, Geet immediately looked down her cheeks flaming… while Maan just smirked and went to check on the door…

“Maan bete, wo dinner ready hai jaisa appney kaha tha, main yahi kamre mein bhijwaa doon?” Kaka asked him to which Maan positively nodded, keeping in mind Geet’s not so presentable attire…

A few minutes later both the lovebirds ate a lovely scrumptious dinner, consisting of all Geet’s favourites, in each other’s company. After giving Geet her medicine, Maan lied down on the bed encaging Geet in his arms. He gently caressed her hair.

“Mera sabse bada surprise toh tumhare liye yehi hoga jab main hamare gunehdaaron ko tumhare saamne la ka khada kar doon… Aur unn sabhi ko zindagi ke har pal-pal ke liye tumhaara mauhtaaj bana doon…” Maan thought to himself.

Finally they both finally slipped into a peaceful slumber, listening to the lullaby of each other’s heartbeat.

NEXT DAY

Maan yawned stretching his hands, only to find a heavy weight resting on his body partially. He kept looking at the beauty in his arms, with the cute adorable pout, messy hair and his own kurta… He felt that it was all his dream and would soon vanish if he even blinked his eyes. His eyes fell on the wall clock and he unwantedly slipped out from the bed adjusting a pillow in his place. Geet mumbled incoherently as she felt the loss of warmth, she turned her face away and slept once again.

Maan chucked at her antics and was slowly tiptoeing out of the room when he spotted the clothes Geet was wearing, on the night he found her in dargah, in the laundry basket. He took them out and observed it closely.

“Yeh to waise suits hain jaise Geet shaadi se pehle pehnaa karti thhi… Aur wo toh uss din ke baad kabhi apney uss ghar mein lauti hi nahi toh phir yeh Geet ke paas aaye kaise???” Maan thought while inspecting the clothes once again.

PRECAP

Maan knowing Geet’s side of the story…

and Maan becoming mad in anger but why???

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Kaafilaa Part 9

While having the ‘Shaahi Bath’ Maan arranged for her, Geet truly felt super happy… She had seen such arrangements in only films and secretly had always dreamt of it, seems her dream man was hell bent on making all her dreams true!!! Just the thought of Maan made her cheeks warm, slowly she just relaxed and let the feeling of warm water and soothing fragrance take over her senses!!!

After a few minutes, slow music started playing in the background making Geet startled… She looked around trying to locate the source of the music, she was about to step out of the bathtub when two warm hands held her shoulders from behind… A shocked Geet was about to shout but when those slender hands started massaging her back, she recognized the touch instantly!!! She turned her head to look at him questioningly but Maan didn’t let her turn…

“Shhh… Just relax Jaan let me pamper you…” Maan purred in her ears, making her squirm all the more!!!

Geet was about to protest but then the sinful hands started their work, she involuntary sighed and her body just relaxed!!!

Maan’s expert hands just pressed all the points on her neck and spine at just the right places, while the sensuous scent of the oil just added to the effect!!! Geet just felt as of she was in heaven…

“Enjoying sweetheart???” Maan questioned her lovingly already knowing the answer, as all her reactions were clearly exhibiting how much she was enjoying!!!

“Hmmm…” Geet could just let out a moan as the magical hands slowly travelled up the spine releasing all her tired knots on the way!!!

Maan removed his hands for a while making Geet whimper…

“Ummm????”

“Just a second Jaan…” Maan cooed his impatient Jaan while dabbing the next set of oils in his palm and applying it gently on her soft sensitive scalp…

Geet couldn’t help but shudder as the cool oil slowly spread throughout her hair!!! Maan slowly massaged her scalp in soft circles making Geet relax completely!!! Geet slowly felt herself slipping into a relaxed semi consciousness state while Maan continued his work…

Geet mind was completely relaxed and all this pampering made her drift to the painful memories of the last few days, when her savior, her Maan was not with her…

PAST

It has been two days since she was kept captive in this god-forsaken place… Though her hands and legs were tied while she was blindfolded as well, but she could still make out she was in some sort of an isolated place that maybe had burnt recently as the she could smell burnt rubber….

The sounds she heard around her were almost minimal, barring occasional shuffling of feet when one of those kidnappers came to check on her. She could once in a while feel soft brushing up of mice scurrying around against her feet making her shudder… The smell of burnt scarp made her feel like puking, in fact she would have puked at least 10 times till now but it was impossible on an empty stomach… Yes! She not even a single morsel of food had gone in her stomach since last 3 days, since she was kidnapped!!!

Occasionally one of the kidnappers used to come and pierce an injection on her hand to make her unconscious or to make her drink some water before injecting that drug but that was it!!! Geet was not the one to wallow in self-pity, she was a strong girl and had her senses on alert when she gained consciousness, and she had tried tugging the ropes on her wrist to loosen them or anything that might let her escape… But three days had went by and she was growing weak… Slowly she was loosing the spirit… She couldn’t help but think about her Maan-

Aaj chali main ek iss raah par…

Na koi manzil, na koi hai dar…

Bas sochoon aaj main yeh…

Kaafila ka yeh rukh mohey kahaan le jaave???

Zindagi ki yeh dor kab kahaan tham jaaye???

O saiyaara tere dil ki kya dua hai???

O saiyaara tohey kya abb hua hai??

Bas yeh soch hui main yahaan shamil…

Ki khuda hai Kaafiley ki manzil!!!

Par kya pata tha yeh mujhe…

Ki bas khatam aaj samaa hai…

O saiyaara tere dil ki kya dua hai???

O saiyaara tohey kya abb hua hai???  

She came out of her thoughts when she heard the door creaking, as one of the kidnappers entered… The shuffling of feet got closer to her…. From the sound of footsteps she could make out that there were at least more than two people here… To be on safe side, she pretended to be still unconscious…

“Lagtaa hai ladki abhi bhi behosh hai…” the first person checked on her and concluded….

“Achchhaa hai… Waise zyada overdose mat dena… Marni nahi chaiyeh ye…” The second person warned…

Oh god!! Geet was actually able to make out who this person was, though she had her fingers crossed hoping that she was wrong!!!

“Marr bhi jaaye toh kya farak padta hai…” The third person spat…

No! No! No!! It can’t be… Geet’s mind screamed!!!

“Nahi abhi ye marni nahi chaiyeh…Abhi hamara kaam pura nahi hua hai… Kaam pura hine ke baad tum khud jaise chaaho waise issey maar sakti ho…”Person 2 consoled person 3…

“Ha ha ha haha!! Bilkul… issey toh main tadpa tadpa kar maaroongi…”Person 3 started laughing maniacally!!!

“Sahib waise iss ladki ke khaane ka kuchh bandobast karna padega,… nahi toh yeh zyada din tak nahi tik paayegi…” Person 1 told the other persons!!!

“Theek hai yeh lo kuchh paise… abb hum chaltey hain… Kuchh bhi baat ho toh mujhe call kar dena…” Person 2 handed out a few 100-rupee notes to person 1…

“Chaliye Mohinder Ji…” Person 3 exclaimed!!!

PRECAP

Arrey!!! Maan’s surprise is still incomplete!!!

And

Smart Maan to find out something!!!

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Okies!! Now me feeling great after days after writing the TWISHHHT!! Hope you liked it too dears!! he eh eh!!! 

Awww those who aren’t very happy, trust me dears, you are gonna love the twist!!!

Hope the spa portion was good!! 

Hope you all felt Geet’s pain dears!! Me actually was clueless how to write Geet’s situation!! hope me did justice!!!

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Kaafilaa Part 8

*My net still not working well so banner to be uploaded soon*

A very Happy Belated Diwali to all my awesome friends!! Hope you had awesome fun and got lots of gifts!! he he!!

Everyone out with swords jutis and chappals aiming at me for the delay, please direct them towards my internet provider and the University of Rajasthan… These two are entirely responsible for it!! Me innocent bachcha at no fault!!

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The scene that greeted Maan in the kitchen was hilarious!! Poor servants were standing with their heads bowed down while Geet was taking their class!!!

“Yeh chhini ka dabba khula kyun hai, kya aaj aap sab ne cheetiyon (ants) ko daawat par bulaya hai??? Aur yeh gas stove itni gandi kyun hai… Chhi… Aur yeh Kitchen cloth last kab badla tha??? Dekh kar toh lag raha hai, ki world war I ke time ka hai… Chhi… Itna unhygienic hai…”

Nakul saw Maan and requested him with his eyes to save them all from Geet’s Hitler Avatar but Maan just gave a lopsided smile as if mocking them… “Mera mazaak uda rahey thhey na abb bhugto…” But after a few minutes Maan finally had a pity on the poor servants who were just about to cry!!!

He wordlessly crept behind Geet and slipped his arms on her waist!!! Geet gasped and before she could respond, Maan scooped her in his arms and took her to their bedroom!!

“MAAAN!! Yeh aaap kya kar rahey hain… Utariye mujhe… ABHIIII!!” Geet shouted while struggling to get out of Maan’s hold… Kicking her legs in the air… but Maan paid no heed to her and carried her all the way to their bedroom!!!

He gently dropped her on the bed and Geet tried to run away as soon as Maan left her but before that Maan locked her in the cage formed between his arms and the bed and warned her…

“Sochna bhi mat yahi bethi raho warna…”

“Warna kya???” Geet asked getting agitated…

“Warna yeh…” Maan said and started tickling her!!!

“N.. nahi.. he he… ma.. Maan… ha ha ha.. chho… he ha… Chhodo…ha ha…” Geet cried amidst laughing!!

Maan enjoyed seeing Geet laughing so freely after such a long time but then left her as she was feeling out of breath… he got up and took out a capsule from the strips kept on the bedside table and offered it to Geet with a glass of water…

Geet made a baby face and looked at Maan pleadingly…

“Chup Chaap khaao nahi toh…” Maan didn’t have to complete his sentence as Geet quickly snatched the capsule and gulped it down before Maan started tickling her once again!!

She made a yucky face and Maan offered her a dairy milk chocolate that he had bought for her… Geet happily took it and started relishing it while Maan relished her cute expression that she made while eating the chocolate!!

“Hmm… Chalo abb thodi der rest karlo meri Jhansi Ki Rani… My baby is cribbing that her mom is not letting her rest and she is missing out on her beauty sleep…” Maan said while tucking Geet in the blanket!!!

“Oyeee… Kya kaha aapne mujhe??? Jhansi ki Rani??? Toh phir aap bhi na… ummm… Haan… Lord Voldemort ho!!! Aur yeh kya she-she laga rakha hai… Mera betey ko she kehna band karo…” Geet complained!!

“Lord voldemort… Huh… Theek hai abb main kitna Lord Voldemort hoon yeh toh baad mein bataaoonga… Par haan yeh baat samajh lo ki this is my sweet angel… my baby girl in here…” Maan said while gently touching and patting Geet’s tummy…

“… Bilkul meri Geet jaisi.. And don’t worry about your beta… We will have one but NEXT TIME!!!” Maan said the last bit a little loudly making Geet blush!!

Maan lowered Geet and caressed her hair till the medicine took effect and Geet slipped into deep slumber!! Maan then checked his watch and thought…

“Hmm abhi toh time baaki hai… Koi baat nahi let me start a bit early… The spa is almost at city outskirts and I need to be back in time!!!” He dropped a kiss on Geet’s forehead and left for the spa!!

EVENING

Maan had just come back and made his way towards the room thinking that Geet must have woken up by now but he was greeted by a very cute sight!!! Geet was cuddling up with his pillow and was still sleeping with a sweet smile adorning her face!! He knew Geet must be very tired as her body was still very weak… That’s why it was almost 9 PM still she hadn’t woken up!! He was happy, as his work was now easier!!! He didn’t disturb her and left for the washroom silently with the packet in his hand!!

While Maan was busy working on his surprise, Geet finally woke up from her deep slumber… She was stretching her muscles while yawning when her eyes fell on the clock kept on the side table…

“Hey babaji… Main itni der se so rahi hoon??? Maan ne mujhe uthaya kyun nahi??? Aur yeh Maan hai kaha???” She thought to herself while getting off the bed…

 She was thinking of going down to check on Maan when she heard some noise from the washroom….

“Hmmm lagta hai Maan washroom main hai… Main yahi beth kar unka wait karti hoon…”

Geet sat back on the bed waiting for Maan… After a few minutes Maan came out of the washroom and found Geet leaning on the bed post while slightly dozing off… She was really very weak and her body was trying to retain the little energy by resting…

“Arrey Geet… Tum uth gayi…” Maan exclaimed… Though he wanted Geet to rest as much as possible but right now he wanted to give her the surprise and for that he needed her to be awake!!!

“Maan!!!” Geet spoke drowsily while slowly getting off the bed and leaning on her best comfort pillow… Her Maan’s comforting arms… The world’s safest place on earth!!!

Maan chuckled seeing her getting so drowsy, he wordlessly lifted her from the ground while carrying her to the washroom!! Geet immediately opened her eyes wide when she felt she was in air…

“Maaan!! Yeh aap kya kar rahey hain????” Geet shouted mortified noticing where Maan was carrying her off to…

Maan didn’t bother to reply… He just kept Geet back on her feet after entering the washroom… Geet was about to shout more but then when she had a glimpse of the surroundings, she lost her voice!!!

The whole washroom was transformed into something…. Heavenly!! The bathtub was filled with rose petals and the water had something mixed in it, which resembled a combination of milk and turmeric… There were scented candles lit all over which spread a soothing yet sensuous aroma around!! There were small rose scented candles lit around the circular bathtub at regular intervals… Even the white carpet had been replaced with a small rangoli sought of a thing made by colorful candles and rose petals… The overall ambience of the room was just out of the world!!

“M…m…Maaan????” Geet barely whispered still under shock!!!

“Shh Jaan!!!” Maan shut her up by placing his finger on her lips… He understood her unsaid words!! He never needed words to know about what she felt!! Just her eyes were enough!! There was a time when he had actually misread her eyes and he was still guilty for that!! He shook his head to get rid of those thoughts!! Today, he just wanted to pamper his Jaan, and such wayward thoughts had no place in it!!!

“Geet!!! STRIP!!!!!” Maan suddenly spoke!!

“WHATTTTT!!!” Geet shrieked truly mortified!!

“Uff Geet!! I meant you can’t have a bath na with clothes on!!! Tum bhi na pata nahi what dirty thoughts you get in mind!!! You have a nice bath and I will come in a few minutes!!” Maan spoke with as much seriousness and innocence as he could though there was a hidden mirth beneath his eyes, which our dear Geet failed to see!!

A confused Geet just stood there wondering what just happened and finally shrugged it off!!! She was quite excited with the whole surprise Maan had set up for her and decided to just enjoy that!! Little did she know that this was just the beginning of her surprise!!

PRECAP

Surprise continued…

&

Glimpse of villain… or maybe villains!!!

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Me really sorry since me owed you a long update after so much delay, but cant help it dears!!

BTW Kaafilaa is soon coming to an end in maximum 2-3 parts!! Me a li’l sad about it!!!

Am sure many of my supe intelligent buddies have guessed what’s gonaa happen next!! And yup me wants to warn in advance, no X-rated thoughts about the next update, me an innocent bachcha with innocent updates!! he he!!

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Kaafilaa Teaser 24/10/12

Hi Friends!!

Okies me knows that its been very long since I last updated this one and am really sorry dears!! Actually me was still thinking how to shape up the story now…

But since me is on an updating spree today!! Me though why not give at least  a Teaser for Kaafilaa too!!! So here it is dears!!

TEASER 

Nakul saw Maan and requested him with his eyes to save them all from Geet’s hitler Avatar but Maan just gave a lopsided smile as if mocking them…“Mera mazaak uda rahey thhey na abb bhugto…” But after a few minutes Maan finally had a pity on the poor servants who were just about to cry!!!

He wordlessly crept behind Geet and slipped his arms on her waist!!! Geet gasped and before she could respond, Maan scooped her in his arms and took her to their bedroom!!

“MAAAN!! Yeh aaap kya kar rahey hain… Utariye mujhe… ABHIII!!” Geet shouted while struggling to get out of Maan’s hold… Kicking her legs in the air… but Maan paid no heed to her and carried her all the way to their bedroom!!!

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Hoping you liked the Teaser dears!! Will try to update this one soon but cant tell when!! My poor fingers are aching as since yesterday me is typing continuously!! Me has updated Twisty Deewangi and Aaiynaa dears!! So you can check it out dears!!

Thanks for bearing with me dears!!

Love you…

Ruchi

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Kaafilaa Part 7

Geet had woken up from her deep slumber a few minutes back… She had not had such a peaceful sleep since last many days… She was feeling as fresh as a flower and there was a smile adorning her lips!!!

She yawned and stretched trying to revive her still lethargic muscles… She looked around trying to find any traces of her dear husband but she fond none…

“Maan…” She feebly called out to him but there was no response…

She slowly got off the bed stabilizing herself with the support of the bed rim as she was still quite weak and felt dizzy… She looked inside the washroom and finally left with no other alternative came out of her room…

Nakul kaka was just making his way up with a glass of fresh juice as he knew that Geet could wake up any time, when he saw Geet coming out of the room while holding her head with one hand… He immediately rushed to her and held her with one hand while keeping the tray on the nearby curio table…

“Geet beti… Yeh aap kya kar rahi hain… Aapko aaram karna chaiyeh…” Nakul softly chided her while escorting her to the room once again… But our dear Geet had different plans…

“Nakul Kaka!!!!” Geet jumped up in excitement seeing him after so long and hugged him tightly, taking him by surprise…

“Kaise hai aap??? Aur baaki sab kaise hain???” Geet asked excitedly forgetting all traits of her weakness…

Nakul Kaka smiled seeing the life of this house and his daughter once again in front of him… He kept a comforting hand on her head while slowly caressing her hair…

“Main abb bilkul theek hun beti, aapko dekhney ke baad, aur jo kuchh bhi abb tak theek nahi tha, wo bhi ho jaayega, kyunki abb aap aa gayi hain…” Nakul finished with a sigh..

Geet frowned not understanding his point…

“Baaki sab theek ho jaayega matlab????”

“Uhhh… wo kuchh nahi beti… aap yeh sab chodiye aur chaliye aaram kijiye… aaiye hum aapko kamre tak le jaayein phir appko juice bhi peena hai…” Nakul immediately changed the topic, while biting his tongue for blurting out so much…

“Nahi Kaka… Mujhe aaram nahi karna.. Aur jaldi sey bataiye aap mujhsey kya chhupa rahey hain??? Chaliye…”

Geet took Nakul’s hand and descended the stairs, many times she was about to slip but Nakul held her in place… Nakul tried to instill some sense in her but Geet is Geet, she paid no heed… She soon sat on the table in the living room and made Nakul Kaka sit on the sofa in front of her…

“Abb Bataiye…”

Nakul sighed knowing well that now Geet wont leave the topic so easily, so he started telling her all the happenings that took place in her absence…

By the time he finished, Geet was fuming with anger, and Nakul knew that now no one could save Maan from Geet’s wrath!!!

KHURANA MANSION

Half an hour later…

Maan left the car at the entrance not even trying to park it in the portico and almost ran in as if running for an Olympic 100 meter sprint!! He knew Geet would have woken up by now and not finding him by her side, she would have lifted the whole house on her head!!!

But to his utter surprise, all he greeted was, with silence… As soon as he entered the house, he saw a lone figure sitting on the sofa… Maan was confused for a few seconds then when the realization hit him, he started boiling in anger….

“GEEET… Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho… Maine tumhe kamre mein aaram karney ko kahaa tha na…” Maan shouted on her slowly making his way towards her almost towering up on her sitting form on the sofa…

To Maan’s surprise, he was greeted with an equally angry in fact even more dangerous glare, which sent shivers down Maan’s spine!!! Maan looked at her confused as well as surprised trying to think of the causes of such anger… She surely couldn’t be so angry just because he went missing for a few hours!!!

“Nakul Kaka…” Geet called out Nakul…

“Jee Geet beti kaam ho gaya…”

That’s when Maan noticed the whole stream of servants were holding cartons in their hands… He looked at their faces and to his extreme surprise, all of them including Nakul Kaka were giving him pitying looks…

“Yeh ho kya raha hai???” Maan asked a little sternly…

“Kya ho raha hai… Yeh AAP mujhsey puchh rahey ho??? AAP BATAO WHAT WERE YOU DOING IN MY ABSENCE!!!” Geet shouted on Maan…

“M.. mmm… main…” Poor Maan stammered while Nakul Kaka and all the servants chuckled seeing the Sher become a Bhiggi Billi in front of the Sherni!!!

“Haan A…aaa… aap…” Geet mocked him…

“Aur aap sab… GET BACK TO YOUR WORK!!!” Poor servants scurried away immediately, literally vanishing in seconds, Nakul Kaka too hurried away but not before giving a consoling look to Maan…

“Haan toh abb aap mujhey bataney ki zehmat karengey ki meri absence mein aapney sharaab peeney aur khud ko chot pahunchaaney ke alaawa aur kya kiya hai…” Geet asked him while crossing her hands on her chest!!!

“Wo… wo… G… Gggeet… Aisa kuchh nahi….”

Geet cut him off and shouted, while pointing a finger at him…

“JHOOTH BOLNE KI KOSHISH BHI MAT KARIYEGA…  Mujhe sab pata hai… I have my sources!!!”

Maan cursed Nakul Kaka in his mind knowing well he is Geet’s Chamcha and would have filled her with all the happenings…

“Abb mere Nakul kaka ko kosna band kijiye and get ready for your punishment…”

“Punishment???” Maan asked incredulously but regretted the very second when his eyes met with Geet’s flashing ones!!

“Haan Sazaa… Aaj sey aap din mein 3 glass doodh piyenge to make up for all the rubbish you gulped down your throat!!!”

“DOODH!!! Cheee… You know Geet mujhe milk se nafrat hai… I ca’nt even stand its smell… Ewww…” Maan said making faces!!

“Chaar karoon…” Geet asked him warningly…

“Nahi nahi… 3 will do…” Maan immediately said accepting his sazaa like a 3-year-old baby does after doing mischief…

“Good… Lets start from now… Nakul Kaka…”

“Jee beti… yeh lijiye Maan Beta…” Nakul Kaka appeared right before Maan with a big tumbler of milk…

“ABHI???” Maan said making faces while eyeing the huge tumbler enough to feed milk to ten persons!!

“Haan ABHI… Nahi to phir paanch glass…”

Maan didn’t wait to hear further and gulped down the yucky white liquid in one go, making Nakul chuckle… Maan glared at him while keeping the now empty tumbler back on the tray… Nakul immediately got the signal and ran away laughing silently!!!

“Hmmm good boy…” Geet said and came ahead to wipe off the mustache that had formed due to milk, with her dupatta… Maan felt as if he is in heaven at the soft feel of her fingers accompanied with the silk cloth… He wouldn’t mind to even gulp that yucky liquid ten times a day if he got the same treatment…

“Abb aapki doosri sazaa…” Geet immediately composed herself and took off her hands before she lost herself in the feeling of the rough stubble against her soft skin…

“EK AUR SAZAA???” Maan woke up from his dream after getting the rude shock!!

“Haan… Bahut shauk hai na aapko apni wo kya kehtey hain… Tai Chi karkey khud ko chot pahunchaaney ka… Toh aaj sey aapke Gym room par maine taala lagwa diya hai…”

“WHATTT!! Geet this is too much… Tum achchhi tarah sey jaanti ho ki main exercise karey bina nahi reh sakta…” Maan was truly pissed off now…

“Mainey aapko exercise karney sey kab mana kiya… Just you will do a different exercise…”

“Aaahaa!!! Different exercise!! Hmmm…. Iraada kya hai Geet??” Maan asked naughtily while wiggling his eyebrows…

“Chhhiii… Get your mind out of gutter… By different exercise mera matlab hai ki absey aap Nakul Kaka ki help karengey since am getting the house renovated… Toh cheezen utha ke idhar udhar rakhney mein aap unki help karengey… Theek hai…”

“But Geet… Iss ke liye toh main abhi workers employ kar sakta hoon na…”

“Bilkul bhi nahi… Yeh hamara ghar hai aur iska renovation ham khud karenegy… In my strict surveillance!!” Geet finished off with an air of authority…

Maan sighed… Today his dear Biwi was in a Hitler avatar… Hell bent on making his life hell… He just nodded accepting all her wishes…

“Good… Baaki ki punishment baad mein… Mujhe abhi kuchh kaam hai…”Geet finished and left for the kitchen…

“Matlab aur bhi Sazaa hai??? Unbelievable…” Maan said to himself in shock…

Maan was hell irritated and was about to go and start manayofying Geet before she actually made his life hell when his phone vibrated in his pocket…

“Hello…”

“Is that Mr. Maan Singh Khurana???”

“Yes…”

“Sir… I am calling from ‘Get Re-Energized Spa’ sir…. Maine aapko call kiya tha to confirm the appointment of today evening…”

Maan smirked… He had completely forgotten about it… He had now found the best way to manayofy his wife!!!

“Yes… I will be there…”

“Okay Sir… We will wait for you at 7 P.M. Sharp…”

“Right!! Thank You…”

“Bye Sir… Have a nice day!!”

Maan rubbed his hands gleefully… He checked the time and saw that it was time for her medicines… He made his way towards the kitchen wondering ki abb Hitler kis bicharey par apna keher dha rahi hai!!!

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Haayo Rabba!!! The Spa treatment!!!Shocked

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Kaafilaa Part 6

“Yes your mom SAMEERA SINGHANIA… Your so called mother MRS. SAVITRI DEVI SINGHANIA…” Maan spoke gritting his teeth!!!!

Sameera was totally stunned and praying fervently for the safety of her life… she knew that stepping in a hungry lion’s liar was far more safe than facing the wrath of Maan Singh Khurana… She just blinked back and gulped her fears and whispered in a meek tone…

“Woh… wo… Mom… She is in L… London…”

“Oh really??? Well I didn’t know when the MGF mall of Connaught Place shifted to London!!!” Maan spat sarcastically!!!

Poor Sameera… Now she was cent percent sure that Maan had a fair idea of her and her mom’s ministrations and in fact he had been keeping a tab on them and their activities… So she started shedding her crocodile tears hoping they would work, lest did she know that Maan Singh Khurana least cared about anyone’s tears except of course his Geet’s precious pearls…

“Maan… sob… sob… mujhe kuchh nahi pata… sob sob… sach main… Main to tumhari dost hoon na… Main tumhare saath kuchh bura nahi kar sakti na… wo to mom ne… Mera matlab hai Geet…”

Her sob story was giving Maan a headache but still he was tolerating it but when she uttered Geet’s name from her filthy mouth, all hell broke loose and he shouted…

“STOP IT SAMEERA… DON’T YOU DARE TAKE GEET’s NAME FROM YOUR MOUTH… Maine yahan tumhe tumhari bakwaas sunne ke liye nahi bulaya… I have called you for a purpose… Abhi ki abhi apna phone nikalo and call that sorry excuse of a woman, your mother and ask her to come and meet you at the Purani Ghaati…”

“M… M… mmain???”

Sameera was now seriously scared as well as confused… what was Maan’s game??

“Haan tum… Main chahoon toh yeh kaam khud bhi kar sakta hoon but I know ki that woman will avoid meeting me directly aur ussey shak ho jaayega… So what better way… Uski apni beti ussey wahan bulayegi aur uske muh sey sab sach kabool karvaayegi… How’s that ? ? ? Maan wiggled his eyebrows…

“M… mm.. Maan…. wo…”

Sameera tried to come up with an excuse to avoid this situation though her mind was totally blank at this point…

“Main tumhe koi option nahi de raha hoon Sameera… Tum sey behtar shayad koi nahi jaanta ki main kis had tak tumhe barbaad kar sakta hoon… Parr iss waqt mujhe tum sey zyada interst tumhari mom mein hai… So stop wasting your and my time and call her… NOW…”

Maan finished off angrily and Sameera was scared out of her wits, she hastily took out her mobile and immediately dialed her mom’s number…

“Hello.. Mumma…”

“Sameera beta??? Tumne yuh achanak call kiya??? Sab thik hai na???”

Maan gave Sameera a stern look while pointing one finger at her and Sameera immediately scrambled…

Wo… Mumma please mujhe abhi issi waqt Purani Ghati par miliye… wo main…”

Before she could continue Maan snatched her mobile and cut the call…

“Good… I guess chuhey ko bill sey nikalne ke liye its more than enough… Till then you are my guest… And trust me main apney mehmaanon ki khaatirdaari bohat achchhi karta hoon…”

“Kyaaa???”

“Obviously… tumhe kya lagaa main tumhe itni aasani sey chhod dunga??? No no no Sameera, tumhi toh mera wo mohra ho jiskey zariye main apni manzil tak pahunchunga…”

Sameera gulped while Maan smirked…

PURANI GHAATI, Delhi Outskirts

Maan had laid out his plan very carefully. He knew one mistake from his end could make him lose this only chance he had. He was waiting comfortably leaning on the car bonnet while Sameera was safely deposited at his farmhouse amidst strict vigilance. He couldn’t risk bringing her here!!

After a few minutes another car came to a screeching halt only a few yards away from him. A woman draped in an orange and green Kanjivaram Silk saree stepped out of the door opened for her by her chauffer, clearly giving a glimpse of her expensive stilettos and perfectly pedicured feet…

She removed her goggles, but Maan felt that he needed one to maintain the eye contact with her, considering the amount of gold and diamonds she had on her… she looked like a gold and diamond exhibition on display!!!

“Hello Mrs. Singhania…” Maan greeted her with a mocking smile…

“What the hell are you doing here Maan Singh Khurana??? Aur meri beti kahan hai??”

“Well!! Good question!!! Aapki beti… Umm let me think… Well last time I saw her, she was chained to a rickety chair and being beaten up like a dog…”

Maan clearly lied to rile her up; He didn’t do any such thing to her, though he was literally itching to do so!!!

“WHAAATTT!!! I will kill you!!!”

Savitri Devi lunged forward but Maan moved a step ahead and literally came face to face, intimidating her, forcing her to move back to her place!!

“Agar main aapki jagah hota toh aisi galti kabhi nahi karta, considering my one phone call can take away your precious daughter’s life…”

Maan said flashing his mobile in front of her, clearly sending out the warning….

“Tum chahtey kya ho???” She spoke gritting her teeth…

Maan spoke slowly giving her the impression that he didn’t know where is Geet…

“Aahaa…. Now you are talking… well for the starters, where is Geet???”

She first stuttered then spoke gaining a little confidence…

“M… Mujhe k. kaise pat.. pata hoga??? And moreover why are you asking for her?? Tum toh uss sey naftrat kartey ho na???”

“Yup… Aap sahi keh rahi hain… Mujhe uss har janey sey nafrat hai jisney mere saath kuchh bhi bura kiya hai ya bura karney ki koshish ki hai…” He gave her a piercing gaze all the while saying this…

Savitri Devi Singhania was a little confused with the way Maan was giving such puzzling replies though she said nothing…

“Well… Let me come to the point… Mujhe pata hai ki Geet aapke paas hai, my detectives clearly told me that she was last seen with you… Mujhe iss baat sey koi matlab nahi hai ki where is she, how is she etc.. etc…. I want to give her DIVORCE… Ussi ki proceedings ke liye mujhe uskey signatures chaiyeh papers par…”

Maan said all the while looking in her eyes which clearly depicted that she was scared first, then confused and finally she was smirking as she felt that the game was once again in her hands….

“Sure… Par yeh to tum mujhe waise bhi keh saktey thhey na… Why did you involve my daughter in all this??? She is innocent…”

Mrs. Singhania said trying her best to get Sameera out of this mess…

Maan ignored her answer and replied monotonously while getting into his car clearly showing that the conversation was done for him…

Maybe she is… Par aap nahi ho… Mujhe pata hai ki you are involved in all this… So till you get Geet to me for getting the formalities done… Sameera is my guest…”

Maan then remembered something and spoke by lowering his car’s window…

“And yes sooner the better… Otherwise mujhe nahi pata ki how many broken bones will your lovely daughter have by then…”

He then sped away with a smirk, leaving behind a bewildered Mrs. Singhania…

“Yeh Maan aakhir chaahta kya hai??? Mujhe abhi issi waqt Unn sab sey baat karni hogi… they have to find Geet at any cost specially when we are so close to our mission… aur jaldi nahi toh pata nahi yeh Maan meri Sameera ke saath tab tak kya kya kar chukka hoga…” She said to herself while getting in the car…

Yehi toh main jaan na chaahta hoon Savitri Devi Singhania Ki aur kaun kaun tumhare iss plan mein shaamil tha… Aur yeh plan aakhir tha kya…” Maan though to himself while driving off to his Mansion, back to his Jaan, his Geet…

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GEET in HITLER AVATAR!!!

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Kaafilaa Part 5

After a few minutes Maan felt a slight weight on his shoulder and he noticed that his angel had already fallen into deep slumber. He knew she had not slept peacefully since the last few days and all the weariness and tiredness was taking a toll on her. He carefully removed her hand that was clutching his collar in her fist and tucked her in the warm blanket. He kept looking at the innocent angel in front of her and sighed before making his way towards the door, to finish some due tasks….

LIVING ROOM

Maan made his way towards the living room and took out his phone to make a call….

 

“Hello…”

“Hmmm Main Maan bol raha hoon…”

“I need to talk to you urgently… Can we meet today???”

“Ohh!! So where should we meet??”

“Okay!! So can you come to the Khurana Mansion???”

“Right!! I will wait for you!!! Bye…”

Maan kept the phone down and smirked…

“Yes dear I am waiting for you… To give you your life’s biggest surprise and of course making your left over life a living hell!!!!!”

Maan’s eyes had turned red with rage, but he then checked the time and decided that first he will check when is he supposed to give Geet her next set of medicines as he knew once he sets on accomplishing the mission, it will take at least 2-3 hours!!!

“Nakul kaka…”

“Jee beta…”

Wo Medicines jo main laaya tha wo aapne kahan rakhi hain???”

“Beta wo toh humne yahi table par rakhi thi, yeh lijiye…”

“Theek hai kaka…”

“Beta… Geet beti ke liye khaane mein kya kya banana hai zaraa bata dijiye, aur agar kuchh cheezein doctor ji ne manaa ki hain to wo bhi bata dijiye hum dhyaan rakheinge!!!”

Maan looked at the middle aged man in front of him who cared so much for him and Geet, though he was in reality a mere servant but for them he was as much a part of family as their parents would have been…

“Kaka, wo waise to doctor ne koi aisi specific cheez nahi kahi hai par aap phir bhi bas yeh dhyan rakh lijiyega ki juices aur khana puri tarah fresh aur nutritious ho, nahi to aap Geet ko to jaantey hi hain, uska bas chaley to wo to sirf Gol gappa aur chaat par zinda reh sakti hai…”

Nakul Kaka grinned at this knowing well his Geet Beti’s nature…

“Jee beta hum dekh lenge… Aaaj bahut dinon baad ghar pura lag raha hai bete…” Nakul couldn’t help himself from saying that…

“Jee kaka aur abb hamara ghar hamesha aise hi rahega…” Maan spoke determined and gave Nakul’s shoulder a gentle squeeze…

After Nakul left, Maan couldn’t help but ponder over the happenings of the last few days, as a mater of fact, he could trust Nakul more than his or Geet’s own family!! Nakul had been there with him throughout the thick and thin of his life and those who should have been there for him were busy creating more ruckus in his already entangled life!! That was the strange working of this world, where sometimes blood relations stab behind your back while strangers give you the much-needed support to survive!!!

Maan checked the prescription and calculated the number of hours before Geet had taken the last medicine and realized that there were still 3 hours left before she should take her next medicine after lunch so he gave up on the idea to wake up Geet, just then the door bell rang…

DING DONG!!!

Maan moved ahead to open the door and was pleasantly surprised to see her at here!!! Hell, he had just called her a few minutes back and she was already here, he wondered whether she was actually hovering around the mansion only and squinted his eyes trying to analyze from her face if she knew anything about Geet yet!!

“Hey Maan!!! Woh umm… actually main yahi paas mein kuchh khareedne aayi thi jab tumne call kiya so main seedhe yahi aa gayi…” The lady in front of her spoke getting nervous of the scrutinizing gaze on her…

Maan very well knew something was fishy as the nearest market from his mansion was at least 15 KM away while the nearest mall was 20 KM away!!! He preferred calmness and liked staying aloof and hence had built his mansion in this secluded area, though everything had changed after Geet came in his life filling it with her bubbliness!!!

But for the time being he pretended to buy her lie and invited her inside by gesturing her to come in… He had to analyze what was she trying to do and for how long had she been stalking his mansion???

“Maan… where are you lost???”

“Umm nothing… Please make yourself comfortable!!..” Maan said pointing at the sofas!!

“Thanks Maan… So tell me what did you want to talk about??? I know how badly you have been hurt in the past few days and I am always here to support you!!!” The lady sad deliberately trying to touch Maan on the pretext of consoling…

Maan felt amused at this girl’s audacity, she was one of the reasons of all the turmoil in his life and here she was trying to act so innocent and had the nerve to actually console him!!!

“You can tell me anything Maan!! Tell me!!” She said blinking her eyelashes seducingly while Maan felt like puking but controlled himself as he had a bigger task to accomplish before erasing this chapter completely out of his life once and for all!!

“Well am really grateful to you SAMEERA for being with me… Actually I just wanted to ask you something…” Maan spoke having a great difficultly resisting himself from snapping her head off her worthless body…

“Sure…” She said taking a sip of the water offered to her by one of the servants…

“Kya tum mujhe bata sakti ho ki where is the doctor who did Geet’s abortion…”

“WHATTT…” Sameera spluttered out all the water and wondered why was Maan asking this??

“H…how… ww..would i.. kkknow…” She spoke with great difficulty…

Ummm abb main bhi kitna stupid hoon… Right… How would you know??? Par tumhe yeh to pata hoga na ki where is your mom right now???”

“Mom???” Sameera had by now started sweating realizing that Maan definitely knew something…

“Yes your mom SAMEERA SINGHANIA… Your so called mother MRS. SAVITRI DEVI SINGHANIA…” Maan spoke gritting his teeth!!!!

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SAVITRI DEVI and MAAN…

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