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When hells fall on Heaven

Hi dears!! Till date I have posted only on Maaneet on my blog!!

But this is something on the fictionary characters, I have imagined ever since I started writing!!

Its a story on Aditya and Ananya, in fact all the work except Twisty till date had always been on them but I converted it into Maaneet!!

Hope you give my characters a chance and will give me your opinions!!

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Life had been extremely harsh on Aditya. The poor guy had gone on an office trip for a week and had just received the news that his lovely fiancée died in an accident. He was completely devastated and felt crestfallen. He loved her with all his life and couldn’t bear the harsh reality. He gave up on the temptation to join his lover and slit his wrist with the knife lying nearby in the fruit basket, missing the phone call of his fiancée who was calling up to tell him that she was alright, by minutes.

Beautiful rainbow amidst lush greenery and breathtaking landscaping greeted his view after a few hours and he at once knew that he had reached his destination. He was escorted by some men, who looked like bouncers, to Mr. Chitragupta who used to assign heaven or hell to a person based on his or her deeds!!! 

“Mr. Aditya Singh Rathore.” One of the secretaries of Mr. Chitragupta called out aloud.

“Yes, that’s me.” Aditya announced proudly and came in front.

 He was escorted to a cute looking man with a heavy Santa Claus style beard balancing a large notebook on his protruding tummy and barely managing the glasses that kept on falling off his nose.

“So, Mr. Aditya, before I calculate your sins and good deeds, let me ask your opinion, what would you prefer heaven or hell? Though I know the obvious answer but I still give fair chance to everyone.” Mr. Chitragupta spoke up loudly; For a man with his physique, he certainly had a loud voice.

Sir, I don’t care whether its heaven or hell but I would be grateful to you if you could put me in the place where my love, my Ananya is…”

Everyone present there was surprised with Aditya’s answer.

“Oh! So you have committed suicide to join your lover? Interesting. Its very rare to fid such love nowadays… But a real waste…. You see I am really sorry to inform you that your sacrifice has gone waste as your love, your fiancée, Miss Ananya, is very much alive and breathing on earth!!” Mr. Chitragupta informed him.

“WHAT? It’s not possible, there must be some mistake, please check your records once again.” Aditya pleaded dreading what will he do if this piece of information turns out to be true.

“Its true Mr. Aditya. Now according to my calculations, we would be shifting you to…” Mr. Chitragupta tried to announce but was interrupted by the man whom he pitied mentally.

“NO. NO. NO. If my Ananya is down there, send me back too. RIGHT NOW!” Aditya spoke up angrily.

“Well I guess nothing much can be done in this matter so if you could please co-operate we…”

Once again Mr. Chitragupta was disturbed but this time by one of his announcers, who came running to him, panting heavily.

“Sir. Sir. I am sorry to interrupt like this but we have another person here and she demands to see you immediately. When we requested her to wait, she shouted so loudly that all the glasses of the waiting house have shattered. As if that was not enough, she pulled out the receptionist’s hair so badly that she has got bald patches so I had to bring her here before she did any more damage.” 

PRECAP

Who is she???

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Guys, this is the first time I am attempting to write in this manner!! Hope its up to the mark!!!

I will be waiting for your honest opinions!!

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